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Second, I want to clarify I MEAN NO OFFENSE OR DISRESPECT!!!
I think I have some ideas that would clean this pic up a bit and provide more of what you were looking for.
1) reduce the lighting above the pool. Consider taking the shot in the evening if this was outdoors.
(Increase the light beneath the surface, either with flash or via other means.)
2) get the girls COMPLETELY below the surface. This will let all of them be reflected.
3) get them to stop breathing/splashing long enough to clear the bubbles from the frame.
4) with them below the surface, not playing and breathing, the surface of the pool should become like glass, giving a great reflection.
It should improve the shot for what you were attempting, a mirror squared type thing.
This is still a great shot. But to me, it conveys more of the twins joy in play, than the reflection squared theme.
Again, no disrespect intended. Hope this can help you in the future in some small way.
hopefully this summer we can practise and improve some more. again. thanks.